help me rewrite " the script part"

I’m studying for my Communications class and need an explanation.

I hope you can check the files and according to the example on the files ( The script part) and my professor’s comment to help me revise my the script part please focus on the non-actors interacting just help me rewrite the script part do not change my content but add some non actors interacting such as chairs , glasses. please check files they have example

help me rewrite " the script part"